AUTHOR: Susan W. Hixson, Carminati Elementary, Tempe, Az.
GRADE LEVEL: Appropriate for K-3
NE STANDARDS: (Adaptable to different grades)
1.1.7 By the end of first grade, students will write (print) about experiences,
stories, people, objects, and events.
1.2.1 By the end of first grade, students will speak in clear, complete, coherent sentences using standard English.
4.1.3 By the end of fourth grade, students will identify the basic facts and essential ideas in what they have read or viewed.
4.1.5 By the end of fourth grade, students will identify characteristics of different types of text.
4.2.4 By the end of fourth grade, students will use a variety of forms to write for different audiences and purposes.
4.3.2 By the end of fourth grade, student will make oral presentations that demonstrate appropriate consideration of audience, purpose, and information to be conveyed.
OBJECTIVES: Students will be able to:
1. Carefully observe and remember details about the animals at
2. Work cooperatively in groups.
3. List at least 5 facts about each of the animals they saw at the zoo. These facts can be characteristics of actions or physical
4. Follow the form of the given poem and complete each of the lines using facts they have learned.
5. Write a poem and read it orally before the video camera.
Teacher materials: video camera, chart paper
Student materials: paper, pencils
ACTIVITIES AND PROCEDURES:
1. Plan and take a exciting trip to the zoo after reading books and having discussions about zoo animals. Be sure to point out that students are to look for details and facts about the animals they see. Following the trip, students are asked to share the facts they noticed about the animals.
2. During the trip to the zoo, the teacher or volunteer will video tape the animals. (Be sure to take long shots of each of the animals you want, at least 30 seconds on each animal. This will be important later as you voice over on the tape with the poetry performed by the students.)
1. After the trip, the teacher brainstorms with the students some facts about one of the animals she/he saw at the zoo. She models by writing these facts and descriptions on a chart in front of the class. (Tiger, huge cat, gold and black, loud roar, large padded feet, rubbing against a tree, prowling around habitat.)
Next, the class is divided into cooperative groups and each group selects one of the animals which were filmed at the zoo. The entire class watches the tape and each group is careful to focus on the animal they are going to write about.
2. The entire group helps the teacher fill in the blanks of a poetry form.
You have a roar like thunder.
You are fuzzy, gold, and black.
You roam around on padded feet.
You scratch your back on a lonely tree.
You are the biggest cat I have ever seen.
You are my favorite zoo animal because you look so lovable.
The class is taking facts and fitting them into the form, this pattern can be used to review facts about any topic.
3. Now in cooperative groups, the students brainstorm facts about the animal they have chosen. ONe of the students is the scribe and makes a list of the ideas. After all the facts are listed, the most descriptive details are selected or modified and put into the poetry pattern.
(Name of Animal)
You are my favorite zoo animal because you
(Name of Animal)
6. Each group practices reading their poem aloud and then they take turns reading it for the teacher as they are being video taped. The voices of the children will then be copied over the video of the animals.
CLOSURE/TYING IT ALL TOGETHER: The completed product will be a delight to hear and see as the poetry describes the animals. Copies of the tape can be made and checked out by students to share with their parents at home. Poems written by the student groups are also perfect to place on a bulletin board or in a big book for others to read, illustrate, and enjoy throughout the year.
ASSESSMENT: Studetns will be graded by a writing rubric that is
used for all writing in the class.
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